The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information 

Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 

comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates how many
people
contact the Tourist Information Office in a town to get information, whether by meeting in person, sending letters, or simply calling
this
office, in a six-
month
period of time from January to June in the year 2011.
Overall
, it is inevitable from the data that individuals were
firstly
interested in speaking to
this
office through their phones until April,
however
, after that the results changed as many of them got interested in meeting in person.
To begin
with the first
month
of
this
year, almost 1000
people
got information through calling
this
company and getting informed.
This
data went through some changes and dropped down a
month
after that,
although
it experienced an upward trend afterwards in March. The results remained steady from
this
month
and a
month
after that,
as well as
finally
rising and reaching the number of 1600.
This
was the exact time when the plot twisted as
people
tended to visit the place themselves to have face-to-face communication.
While
the in-person data was the lowest at the beginning of the year, it went through significant growth and eventually reached the maximum result of almost 2000 individuals visiting them on a daily basis.
On the other hand
, notions were not interested in having communication by letters. Fewer than 800
people
tended to use
this
method in January,
nevertheless
,
this
experienced a downward trend and by the end of six months, less than 400 nations were reaching through them by letters.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, month with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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