You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates how much the pricing of metals including
Copper
, Nickel, and Zink changed in a whole
year
in 2014, on a monthly basis.
Overall
, it is inevitable from the data that the prices of all these components experienced a plateau over a
year
,
however
,
at the end
of the
year
, Zinc had the highest price of all.
To begin
with, the price of Nickel had a 6%
change
in the first
month
of the
year
, as it was the highest
change
compared to the others.
Although
, it decreased and reached 1% by March and remained steady for a
month
.
Then
it dropped down to -3% in June.
This
data did not remain the same, as it went through various changes in the remainder of the
year
, and eventually ended up in 1% of
change
. Regarding the comparison between the two other metals, the percentage of changes in
Copper
was more than in Zinc in the first
month
,
whereas
as the plot twisted,
Copper
went through a variety of changes over time and experienced its lowest percentages in both June and October with -1%.
While
,
on the other hand
,
Copper
started its journey from 2% and slightly decreased to experience almost -1% of
change
in the fifth and the sixth
month
of
this
year
.
Nonetheless
,
this
metal had an upward trend afterwards and
finally
ended up having almost 2%
the
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change
in the
last
month
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, year, change, month with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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