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The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009.

The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009.
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The provided information encompasses a table delineating the
employment
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rates
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 and the average annual remunerations of new graduates in a specific university in Australia in 2009.
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,
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 to their relatively high
employment
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rates
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, the law, engineering and IT
sectors
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 dominated other categories in terms of average salaries that new graduates annually earned, with the science sector representing the lowest figures in both columns. Looking at the
sectors
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 where the
employment
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rates
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 were comparatively high, despite its low average annual salary of $42,000, health recorded the highest
employment
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 rate, standing at 93%.
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, both the law sector and the engineering and IT
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 had the highest average yearly salaries, representing $59,000.
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, both of the
sectors
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 demonstrated higher
employment
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rates
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 than other categories, with the exception of the health field, with respective numbers of 87% for the former sector and 86% for the latter. Shifting
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 to the segments where the
employment
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rates
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 were low, business-related occupations and arts and social science
sectors
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 accounted for in the vicinity of $50,000 in their average annual salaries.
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, their
employment
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rates
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 stood at 78% for the former segment juxtaposed against 72% for the latter one.
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, science-related jobs showcased by far the lowest figures in
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employment
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 with 62%
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 its average annual salary of $39,000.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words employment, rates, sectors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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