The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate. Write at least 150 words.
The
given
table chart illustrates data concerning changes in different types of Verb problem
apply
travell
(Walking, Bicycle, Car, Local bus, Long-distance bus, etc) in England from 1985 to 2000.
Looking at the Correct your spelling
travel
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that comparing
to the year 1985, the number of Wrong verb form
compared
people
who travell
sharply increased. Correct your spelling
travel
Also
, there was a lot of change mode of travell
.
A cursory glance at the data reveals that most Correct your spelling
travel
people
preferred using their private cars in 1985 consisting of
3199 but in the year 2000, the number of Change preposition
apply
people
sharply increased using their cars from 3199 to 4806. Also
, using Long-distance buses, trains, and taxis people
's accounts significantly grew from 1985 to 2000 and their figures rose by 70, 77, and 29, respectively.
On the other hand
, the number of people
using walking, bicycles
slightly decreased and these were 255 in 1985 soared to 237 in the year 2000, and grew from 51 to 41, respectively.Correct word choice
and bicycles
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