The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table illustrates the
population
details of
Australia
and Malaysia between 1980 and 2002.
Overall
, both countries' populations increased,
moreover
, the
population
aged over 65 has increased as compared to other groups. The growth rate of the total
population
of Malaysia is more than
Australia
. It is conspicuous that the total
population
of
Australia
in 1980 was 14.7% in millions which hiked to 19.6% in 2002. The male and female populations in percentage were the same 49.9% and 50.1% respectively in both years. Average annual
population
growth marginally expanded from 1.2% in 1980 to 1.3% in 2002.
However
, the birth rate of babies was 1.5% in 1980, which upsurged to 1.3% in 2002.
Australia
had 9.6% in 1980 which upturned to 12.4% in 2002 a hike of 2.8%. Moving ahead in terms of Malaysia had
population
expanded 13.7% in millions to 24.3% in 2002.
In addition
, the
population
aged over 65 was 3.7 percent in 1980 which inclined to 4.3% in 2002. The male and female
population
were 50.3% in 1980 with a gentle increase to 50.6% in 2002.
In contrast
, the female
population
was 49.7% in 1980 and
further
declined with a low margin of 49.4% in 2002.
Furthermore
, the birth rate
also
impacted 3.2% in 1980 which reduced by 1% and reached 2.2% in 2002.
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