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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using pen or pencil. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

#people #hand #pen #pencil #development
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 thought of witnessing a decline in a population of
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people
 preferring conventional practice of writing has
became
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 increasingly common.
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 light upon possible reasons
as well as
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its
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their
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 consequences.
To begin
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 with, many reasons are
assosicated
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associated
 with the fact of reduction of writing skills. The dominant reason is
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the advancement
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 of technological inventions. To be more specific, exposure to
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using
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 electronic gadgets
due to
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 work or school
curriculm
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curriculum
 is motivating to
use
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 online applications for typing rather
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then
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than
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 writing by
hand
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.
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,
due to
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presence
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the presence
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 of technical resources people prefer not to write. It has been observed that
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 electronic applications are convenient to
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 as
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compared
 to old writing methods. To be precise,
such
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 online platforms have useful features like grammar and vocabulary
auto-
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correction
softwares
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software
 which makes them less
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time-consuming
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 with better
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outcomes
.
As a result
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, there are hardly any chances of misinterpretation and errors.
On the contrary
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, despite the merits, there are people
those
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who think writing noy by
hand
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 is a negative
developlment
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development
.The contributing
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factor
factors
 is
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loss
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the loss
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 of
a
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skill. To elaborate, writing is not
jsut
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just
 limited to taking notes, but
its
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is
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 an
artform
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art form
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. There are many schools and colleges that organize writing
competions
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competitions
such
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 as calligraphy.
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, people will lose competence if an individual
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 not write by
hand
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Besides
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, writing by
hand
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 improves
cognative
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cognitive
 ability. Put simply,
practicing
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practising
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 a concept by writing it
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several times, retains
in
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it in
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 one's memory for longer.
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, helping to recall the same after years.
To conclude
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,
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although
, technical devices
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 made it easier to store information by allowing to
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different
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 applications
yet
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the benefits of writing by
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are
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are
also
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 not ignorable. I reiterate not writing by
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 is a negative development.
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