The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Average distances in miles per person per year, by mode of travel. Write 150 words.
The table provides key information about the changes in means of transportation in the UK between the years 1985 and 2000, with units measured in
miles
per person per year.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total average distance
rose over 15 years. In addition
, distances travelled by a person using Car, Local bus, Long distance
bus, Train, orTaxi saw an increase, in 2000, whereas
the distances by the other modes of travel decreased in the same year.
According to
what is shown, in 1985, the person travelled the longest distance
using Car, at 3199 miles
, and the second largest distance
was by Other means of travel, Local bus, and Walking, at 450, 429, 255 respectively. Conversely
, Taxi and Bicycles accounted for the lowest ones, at 13 and 51 miles
respectively.
In terms of 2000, there was a significant increase in the distance
travelled using Car by 1607. Moreover
, the distance
by Train, Taxi, and Others soared by 77, 29,and 132 miles
respectively, while
there was a considerable decline in the distance
by Walking and Bicycles, at 237 and 41 miles
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