the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison.

the charts below give information on the ages of  the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison.
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The pie charts illustrate the age distribution for Yemen and Italy in 2000
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and projected numbers for 2050.
It is clear that
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the majority of inhabitants in both Yemen and Italy were below 60
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old in 2000.
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projections for 2050, the population of Italy will be even more elderly. Looking at the information in more detail for Yemen in 2000, the distribution of inhabitants aged 15-59
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old was similar to that of those aged 0-15
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old, with 46.3% and 50.1%, respectively.
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, it is forecasted that the proportion of people aged 15-59
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old will constitute 57.3%, and those under 14
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old will decrease to 37% in 2050. In terms of Italy, the majority of citizens belonged to the 15-59 age group, accounting for 61.6% in 2000. The projection indicates that the proportion of people aged above 60
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old will almost double to 46.2%,
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the proportion of the youngest will remain the smallest, constituting 11.5% in 2050
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