The bar graph represents the average monthly temperature in Lapland region in 2022. Analyze the fluctuations and identify any patterns or trends.
The bar graph illustrates the mean temperature in the Lapland region over the course of twelve months in 2022.
Overall
, it is obvious that the Lapland was under the freezing point for almost half of the year, between November and March, and the temperature was fluctuant around zero degree
Celsius. Meanwhile, there were only three months, from June to August, Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
that
the weather was slightly over ten Correct word choice
when
degrees
.
In
the beginning of the year, January was the coldest month, with -11.6 Change the preposition
At
degrees
Celsius, followed by February with the
mean of -11.1 Correct article usage
a
degrees
. Then
, the climate started to rise approximately 4 to 5 degrees
in
each month and went above zero from April onwards.
Change preposition
apply
Consequently
, the hottest months was
around 14-16 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
degrees
during June and August, Correct word choice
and peaked
peaked
in July Wrong verb form
peaking
with
16.2 Change preposition
at
degrees
. After that, the weather steadily dropped from September,
and went under zero in November. Remove the comma
apply
Finally
, the temperature reached -10.2 degrees
in December.Submitted by pimpisut.sata on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words degrees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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