The maps illustrate remarkable transformations in the coastal village of Seaville over a 30-year period, starting from 1980.

The maps illustrate remarkable transformations in the coastal village of Seaville over a 30-year period, starting from 1980.
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The map depicts the noticeable changes in the coastal
village
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of Seaville from the year 1980
throughout
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2010.
According to
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the picture,
it is clear that
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the
village
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has significant transformations on the
west
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side and
also
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on the east side which is divided by a river. On the
west
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side of the river, The holiday cottage and the marsh were replaced by permanent houses. Woodland
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was located in the north was deforested and became a golf course
instead
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. The retirement
village
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and the boat club had sprung up. A tea room and the sand dunes became the hotel and the restaurant
instead
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. The bridge was constructed to connect the
village
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to the east
bank
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.
Moreover
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, the holiday cottages from the
west
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were moved to the coastal line on the east
bank
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. Most of the roads on the
west
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bank
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remained the same.
However
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, the main roads were extended to the new retirement
village
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and to the east
bank
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. The old hotel which was located to the south of the marsh still stayed in the same place in 1980.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, west, bank with synonyms.
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