The maps illustrate remarkable transformations in the coastal village of Seaville over a 30-year period, starting from 1980.
The map depicts the noticeable changes in the coastal
village
of Seaville from the year 1980 throughout
2010.
Change preposition
to
According to
the picture, it is clear that
the village
has significant transformations on the west
side and also
on the east side which is divided by a river.
On the west
side of the river, The holiday cottage and the marsh were replaced by permanent houses. Woodland that
was located in the north was deforested and became a golf course Correct pronoun usage
which
instead
. The retirement village
and the boat club had sprung up. A tea room and the sand dunes became the hotel and the restaurant instead
. The bridge was constructed to connect the village
to the east bank
. Moreover
, the holiday cottages from the west
were moved to the coastal line on the east bank
.
Most of the roads on the west
bank
remained the same. However
, the main roads were extended to
the new retirement village
and to the east bank
. The old hotel which was located to the south of the marsh still stayed in the same place in 1980.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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