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task achievement
Ensure a clear thesis statement that reflects the stance on the topic in the introduction.
coherence cohesion
Organize ideas into clear paragraphs with topic sentences to improve coherence.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices accurately but avoid overuse.
task achievement
Include more specific examples to support your main points and clarify your arguments.
General
Be cautious with spelling, punctuation, and grammar to enhance clarity.
task achievement
You have taken a clear stance on the topic and are consistent throughout the essay.
coherence cohesion
There is a good attempt to structure the essay into paragraphs and sections.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite