You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of
passengers
using underground
station
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stations
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in London
with
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at
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one-hour
interval
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intervals
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, starting from 6.00 to 22.00.
According to
the figure, it can be seen that the
passengers
usually use underground
train
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to commute from their home to their destination around 8.00 and 18.00. The underground station is used by people in London at 6.00 which is about 100,
then
significantly shoots up to reach a peak at 400 at 8.00. Afterwards, in two hours, it nosedives to just under 200. A moderate increase is seen between 10.00 to 12.00 roughly 250 and the
number
of
passengers
stays mostly the same up to 14.00. After 14.00, There is a sharp drop in the
number
of Londoners who use the station to the same
number
as it is at 6.00, which is approximately 100. The
number
of users overwhelmingly soars to well under 400 again in 18.00. After that, it collapses down to 130 at 20.00 and swings again and ends the period with nearly 140
passengers
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers with synonyms.
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