The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, between 2000 and 2009

The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, between 2000 and 2009
The chart illustrates the
quantity
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number
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of
houses
constructed per year in two various cities, Derby and
Nottingham
, from 2000 to 2009. Units are measured in numbers.
Overall
, the number of
houses
built was
upward
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an upward
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trend in Derby,
while
that of
Nottingham
fluctuated. In detail, the
quantity
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number
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of
houses
built stood at 48, before increasing to 80 at the beginning of the period. The number of
houses
constructed went up to 120 in 2003 and
then
it remained stable in the following 4 years. There was a dramatic rise, at approximately 350
at the end
of the period. With regard to the
quantity
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number
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of
houses
built in
Nottingham
, the number of
houses
constructed made up 50 in 2000,
then
it decreased to 10 in 2002, before rising to 52. There was a gradual rise, at 80 in
Nottingham
in the following 3 years. There was fluctuated and reached 250
at the end
of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses, nottingham with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • number of houses built
  • per year
  • cities
  • Derby
  • Nottingham
  • between
  • comparison
  • 10-year period
  • year-wise
  • analyze
  • compare
  • total
  • over
  • closing statement
  • introduction
  • overview
  • summarize
  • main points
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