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Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Fun fact. It would seen many years we are talking about digital transformation. Nevetheless, some companies haven't finished
this
 process. As I could see, some of them are trying to start with everything at the same time, but, in my opinion, it could lead to more complexity.
For example
, if you don't have a clear, reliable, transperance, and manageble
data
, no one
Data
 lake will help your business. And I see the following activitieas as the first step of inventory and creating the basment for the successful transormation: creating a map of processes with their functions and relations: full
data
 description, including
data
 sources,
data
 collections methods, methods of storage and management,
data
 flow description,
data
 privacy and compliance; list of dictionaries with their characteristics and their normalisation. Having a complete understanding about start point it would be easeir to create a strategy of movement to the next point and company digital level. What was your experience with digital transformaton and what first step would you suggest?
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