The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee in 1999 and 2004 in five European Countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee in 1999 and 2004 in five European Countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
table illustrates the
sales
between
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coffee and bananas in the
year
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years
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1999 and 2004. The proportion of
this
table is calculated in euros. The total number of
countries
analysed is five and all the
countries
belongs
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to a single continent. In 1999 the ratio of coffee sold in all the
countries
outweight
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outweigh
the
sales
of bananas. The
heighest
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highest
amount of coffee is sold in the UK and the lowest is the Sweden. The outlay of
sales
is done between 3, 1.8 and 1 respectively.
Comming
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back to the fruit, Switzerland had a boom in its
sales
to 15 and the
denmark
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Denmark
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did not make much of the profit expected. 2004 had a drastic change in all the
countries
. Both
caffine
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caffeine
and bananas made millions of euros than expected.
Comming
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down to the loss Sweden and Denmark failed to
acheive
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achieve
the target given.
This
results in 1
percent
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of
sales
in both
the
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places compared to the previous year. Denmark as well made 0.9% in
banana
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bananas
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but had
a
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good growth in
caffine
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caffeine
in 2004 to 2%.
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