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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025.
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The bar chart provides details on the Southland's exportation of main products in the years 2000 and 2020, with predictions for 2025. The main goods include tourism, dairy and meat.
Overall
, international tourism gradually increases and is expected to continue the rise,
while
 meat products slowly decline into the future.
On the other hand
, dairy products grow sharply in income, but with a sign of decline in 2025.
To begin
, Southland's tourism provided eight
billion
 in 2000, with a decent rise to nine
billion
 in 2020. An estimation of ten
billion
 is expected in 2025.
Also
,
the
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dairy had the greatest growth among the three main exports in 2020, with a 3
billion
 increase to 10
billion
.
However
, the number will be slightly dropped to approximately 9.5
billion
 in 2025.
In contrast
, the trend of meat exports signals a small decrease, from 6
billion
 in 2000 to around 5.5
billion
 in 2020, with a projection of 5
billion
 in 2025.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports, main exports, projections, trends, significant changes, increased, decreased, speculate, external factors, global demand, technological advancements, trade policies, agriculture, technology, manufacturing, economic implications, employment, GDP, economic growth, global economic trends
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