nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

In recent years,

although

computers bring about various benefits, it has emerged as one of the vital threats to

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lifestyle

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detrimental

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ramifications of playing computer games and propose strategies to alleviate these adverse effects. The primary

issues

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associated with sitting for extended periods playing games can lead to sedentary

lifestyles

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which

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to obesity and health issues.

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, excessive screen time paves the way for disruption of sleep and strain eyes, affecting

overall

well-being detrimentally.

Moreover

, gaming has been linked to social isolation and the deterioration of communication skills among

children

. When

children

spend prolonged periods in game worlds, they may withdraw from real-life social interactions and they may experience difficulties forming and maintaining friendships,

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in group settings.

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prevalence of gaming in South Korea results in

disruption

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of social and interpersonal skills. One potential solution to address the issue of excessive gaming is parents'

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. They play a pivotal role

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limits

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screen time and encouraging

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diverse activities including outdoor play, sports and joining clubs. Parents should

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children

to

reading

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because books can help develop their literacy skills, expand their knowledge, and foster a love for learning.

Furthermore

, governments should invest in educational institutions as technology can hinder the allocating

enough

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time for education and prevent learning knowledge. Governments should

also

organize volunteer activities as

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creations

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can help empathy, and social responsibility

while

providing a sense of collaboration. In conclusion, computer games are a major complication for health problems and social isolation

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may be prevented by the parents’ control and governments' regulations.