The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, it is evident that the
sporting Correct article usage
apply
events
has
the highest Change the verb form
have
number of
attendance Correct quantifier usage
apply
while
the number of
attendance for Correct quantifier usage
apply
theater
is the least in Change the spelling
theatre
this
chart.
Firstly
, 150000 people attended sporting events
in 2017, this
number
is expected to increase more in 2030 , which is expected to reach approximately 165000. The number
of eople
who were at sports Correct your spelling
people
events
were
three times more than the other two Correct subject-verb agreement
was
events
, namely, theater
and concerts.
In terms of the Change the spelling
theatre
atendance
for Correct your spelling
attendance
theater
, there were only about 10000 people Change the spelling
theatre
participated
in 2017, there was a slight increase Correct pronoun usage
who participated
of
the Change preposition
in
number
in 2020. It will be
projected to get more participants in 2030, Wrong verb form
is
accounted
for 50000.
Interestingly, there was a significant improvement is expected for the figure of Wrong verb form
accounting
cocerts
. Correct your spelling
concerts
While
there were 25000 attendies
in 2017, Correct your spelling
attendees
this
number
will be expected to mark about 11000 people in 2030.Submitted by chia.8ee on
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