The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project.  

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, it is evident that
the
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sporting
events
has
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the highest
number of
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apply
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attendance
while
the
number of
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attendance for
theater
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theatre
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is the least in
this
chart.
Firstly
, 150000 people attended sporting
events
in 2017,
this
number
is expected to increase more in 2030 , which is expected to reach approximately 165000. The
number
of
eople
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people
who were at sports
events
were
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was
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three times more than the other two
events
, namely,
theater
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theatre
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and concerts. In terms of the
atendance
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attendance
for
theater
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theatre
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, there were only about 10000 people
participated
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who participated
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in 2017, there was a slight increase
of
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in
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the
number
in 2020. It
will be
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is
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projected to get more participants in 2030,
accounted
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accounting
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for 50000. Interestingly, there was a significant improvement is expected for the figure of
cocerts
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concerts
.
While
there were 25000
attendies
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attendees
in 2017,
this
number
will be expected to mark about 11000 people in 2030.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words events, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attendance figures
  • projected
  • improvement project
  • major enhancement
  • trend
  • time span
  • analyze
  • decrease
  • stagnation
  • growth
  • critical increase
  • forecast
  • overview
  • comparison
  • anticipated
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