The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same period.

The column graph compares the

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of people who visited before and after the renovation

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Ashdown

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the Ashdown

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Museum,

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pie charts represent separately the results of surveys about visitor satisfaction

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before and end of the

restoration

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. Looking from an

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perspective, the

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of

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to Ashdown Museum rose after the

restoration

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. It could be noticed that the proportion of

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` satisfaction strongly grew

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their dissatisfaction

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after the

restoration

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. Getting back to the details

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the

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of

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reached 92.000 after the

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, even though there were 74.000 before the

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. Now, turning to the details in the pie charts that the

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of

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who were very satisfied and satisfied went up by three times, which previously was 25%, and hit three-quarters later. Whilst the total

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of dissatisfied

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were

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initially

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by half, the

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of these

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dropped a fifth later. It is clear from the pie charts that in both periods, 5 % of

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did not respond to the survey.