The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.
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The given chart illustrates how the means of transportation changed in England over the 15-year period from 1985.
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, we can see almost all vehicles had an upward trend except walking, bicycles and local buses had a downward trend. Car is the most used vehicle through 15 years but the taxi was lowest throughout the period. in The number of cars was higher than in other sectors at 3199 in 1985 and went up one and a half times to 4806 in 2000 cars. Other
transportations
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transportation
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and
train
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trains
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also
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climbed
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585 and 366 in 2000 respectively from 450 and 289 in 1985. The number of walking vehicles dropped tediously to 237 from 255,
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the figure for local buses declined steeply
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274 in 2000 from 429 in 1985. And the figure for
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bicycles
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went down steadily from 51 to 41
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of the period.
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