The bar chart below shows the number of films produced of five countries in three years

The bar chart below shows the number of films produced of five countries in three years
The information about the number of movies made in five nations in the given
years
is depicted in the given bar graph. The information is calibrated in the form of
percenatge
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percentage
percentages
. The most striking feature of the chart is that
country
A has shooted maximum films,
while
the minimum movie projects were completed by
country
E in all
years
. In terms of
country
A, 88%
films
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were released in the
years
2007 and 2008 which is 38% significantly higher than
country
B in the same
years
. Later, in 2009, a noticeable difference of 10% in movie making can be seen between
country
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countries
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A and B as the former had a figure of 80% and the latter 70%. Moving to
further
details, in 2007,
country
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countries
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C and E
made
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smallest
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the smallest
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percentage of movies
whereas
in 2009
this
figure was higher than 10% in all three countries.
Lastly
,
country
C filmed 2% more movies than
country
D and E which were noted as nearly 10%.
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