ome children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In

this

contemporary era, with the advancement of

techology

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technology

and globalization, the use of modern technological devices has rapidly increased. Many tend to spend most of

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precious time virtually on modern devices.

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essay outlines the negative development examining the reasons and potential consequences.

Firstly

, the development of cellular phones

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positively

impacted our community in different ways. By examining the method of communication between the past generations

this

method has proliferated the company to provide and upgrade their devices. People from anywhere in the part of the world can communicate virtually.

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, applications like

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WhatsApp

,

instagram

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and

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plays

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a prominent role in

this

generation. Another reason, nowadays a great number of kids own their own smartphones mainly to communicate with their group of friends. Cellular phones

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become an inseparable device in

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adolescents

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lives.

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, pupil

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it for watching movies, playing video games and

also

reading e-commerce books through Amazon

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which

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their attention

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thier

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their

phones. From my perspective,

this

development has

varuious

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various

drawbacks. First and foremost, it is extremely

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as children find themselves scrolling down for hours rather than focusing on extracurricular activities or playing outdoor games with their counterparts. With

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excessive use, people can become isolated and

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difficulty in communicating in

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or even with neighbourhoods.

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, if a child only speaks to his friends by texting, he would not be able to express

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ideas in

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interactions, which will make him depressed and anxious. In short,

although

the growth of modern technology has impacted the world in variable ways, it can damage the

childrens

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brain

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to think and vision with

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over usage even in their growing stage.