You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates data about how individuals migrated from underdeveloping to developing places for a 25-year time period in three different geographical locations.
Overall
, all three countries increased, although
, Indonesia is predicted to show no movement in the foreseeable future.
The most notable observation upon first analyzing the information is the dramatic upsurge in Iran, and it is also
predicted that there will be a significant increase in the future. Additionally
, Iran started with about 8 million
migrants in 2000, which is estimated to grow to approximately 95 million
people in 2025. Furthermore
, the majority of migrants were from Russia at 15 million
in 2000; it is predicted that this
number will grow to 88 million
by 2025. Thus
, Russia and Iran are positively correlated as both will increase. Lastly
, people from Indonesia moved at a gradual pace, which ballooned by more than double from 2000 to 2020, however
, it is indicated that people will not continue to move from rural to urban areas in the foreseeable future.Submitted by jessicajreichel on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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