Computers and A.I. technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

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, it can not be unstoppable
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and computers technology increase sharply in
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for online education. The writer of
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that artificial
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positive effect on the quality of learning
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profound knowledge and it
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in positive development. It must be understood that artificial
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to individuals
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large amount of specialized knowledge.
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today online education develops rapidly accompanied by the improvement of artificial
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amazing tool that can help people.
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useful for our families in controlling the house remotely

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Structure
Ensure your essay has a clear structure, including a distinct introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. This helps the reader follow your argument more easily.
Specific Examples
Provide more specific examples related to how AI enhances the learning experience, which will strengthen your argument and make your points more convincing.
Cohesion
Use a variety of sentence structures and transitional phrases to link your ideas smoothly and enhance readability.
Position Clearness
Clarify your stance on whether you believe AI's impact on online education is generally positive or negative, to make your argument more persuasive.
Content Insight
Good recognition of the potential benefits of AI in education
Relevant Example
Introduction of relevant modern technology example

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innovative platforms
  • customized learning
  • adaptability
  • efficiency
  • lifelong learning
  • automation
  • feedback mechanisms
  • educational resources
  • remote accessibility
  • critical thinking
  • emotional development
  • over-reliance
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