In the modern world, nowadays many countries have problems with a lack of workers, which results in some
people
believeWrong verb form
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that
when goWrong verb form
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to work or study is better than their own
country
.
Whereas
many
people
argue that living in
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country
is a better decision. In my opinion, I strongly believe that going abroad is better for improving yourself.
There are many reasons to go abroad,
firstly
, In
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developed
country
have many opportunities for working than undeveloped
country
.
For example
, The salary is higher than the undeveloped
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and working hours
isChange the verb form
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less than 8 hours. Money is the main reason for their decision.
Secondly
, It is undeniable that education is one of the reasons for
decided movingWrong verb form
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their
liveCorrect your spelling
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to another
country
, because
educationCorrect article usage
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system of developed
countryFix the agreement mistake
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haveVerb problem
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quality
more Correct quantifier usage
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than mother
country
.
Moreover
, the
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others reasonsFix the agreement mistake
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isChange the verb form
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comunicatinCorrect your spelling
communication
communicated
communicating
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byChange preposition
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englishChange the capitalization
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language,
due Change preposition
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to Change preposition
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in recent
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dayFix the agreement mistake
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englishChange the capitalization
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isVerb problem
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playWrong verb form
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a crucial
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rolesFix the agreement mistake
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for many
, when they
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concernReplace the word
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about
conversationAdd an article
the conversation
a conversation
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thatCorrect determiner usage
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environment is important for
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improveWrong verb form
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their skills.
In contrast
, some
people
suggestsChange the verb form
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that living in their own countries is better
forChange preposition
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living
otherChange preposition
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countries.
There
areChange the verb form
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safeAdd an article
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zone for living, they have intimate
family.
the environment of living is
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importanceReplace the word
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point
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concern
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because when
people
go abroad they must
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a lot of routine activities
such
as food, place, or relations between
people
.
To conclude
, there are 2 main key
pointChange to a plural noun
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between going abroad and staying in
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country
. In my opinion, I think going abroad is
betterAdd an article
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way
forChange preposition
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enhance our abilities
such
as language, working experience or study.