Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say – Agree to this arrangement. – Say what time is suitable for you. – Describe what you are planning to do.

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Dear Sarah, I'm writing to let you know that I would be delighted to have your two

children

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at my place during the weekend. It's been so long we didn't see each other. I have an appointment with the dentist at around 10 in the morning. So, you can come to drop them at 11. I shall be back home by that time. I am planning to bring the

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to the zoo. They would be thrilled to see all the wild animals and will surely enjoy feeding them.

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, we would spend the afternoon at the seaside, swimming and having fun. I'm sure that the

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would have a blast. We all can't wait to see the

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on Saturday! See you soon. Best regards, John

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When agreeing to arrangements, it's wonderful to express enthusiasm as you did. It makes your letter warm and welcoming.

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Remember to keep your writing tone appropriate for the context. Your friendly and supportive tone is perfect for writing to a friend in this scenario.

coherence cohesion

Your clear structure, with separate paragraphs for different topics, enhances the readability of your letter.

coherence cohesion

The use of greetings and closings in your letter helps in framing your message, giving it a polite and finished look.

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Exhibits enthusiasm for having the children over, which is compelling and friendly.

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Adequately expresses plans and schedules which aligns with the friend's request effectively.

coherence cohesion

Well-structured, with a logical flow from greeting to expressing agreement, scheduling, and detailing plans.

coherence cohesion

Appropriate use of personal tone, fitting for a letter to a friend, which makes the text engaging and sincere.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

127 words

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