The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.
The picture compares the differences
of
a domestic Change preposition
between
museum
and the environment in 1957 and 2007.
Overall
, the main block of the museum
have
an expansion Change the verb form
has
in
the yearsChange preposition
over
between
. The outer area of the building had a great change in 2007 compared to the setting in 1957, with a narrower garden and more facilities alongside the road.
Inside the main building of the Change preposition
apply
museum
, two rooms were added in 2007, which
in 1957, only three areas were inside the Correct word choice
while
museum
. Within
the years, the local history room is the only place that still Change preposition
Over
existed
inside the exhibition. With the huge Wrong verb form
exists
expand
of the Replace the word
expansion
museum
, the entrance of it was moved, from the middle part of the building in 1957 to the left part of the museum
.
The outer part of the exhibition center
had a new parking space but a smaller garden compared to the place in 1957. Most trees and plants were cut down in 2007, from 11 trees sharply decreased to only 2 plants left. Change the spelling
centre
Furthermore
, some area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
originally
belonged to the green area Correct pronoun usage
that originally
was
developed Correct subject-verb agreement
were
to
a parking lot. A path which linked the road and the entrance of the Change preposition
into
museum
was deleted with the move of the entrance and the clear out of the garden.Submitted by siuboong on
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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