The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.

The picture compares the differences

of

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a domestic

museum

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and the environment in 1957 and 2007.

Overall

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, the main block of the

museum

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have

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an expansion

in

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over

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the years

between

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. The outer area of the building had a great change in 2007 compared to the setting in 1957, with a narrower garden and more facilities alongside the road. Inside the main building of the

museum

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, two rooms were added in 2007,

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in 1957, only three areas were inside the

museum

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.

Within

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the years, the local history room is the only place that still

existed

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exists

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inside the exhibition. With the huge

expand

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of the

museum

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, the entrance of it was moved, from the middle part of the building in 1957 to the left part of the

museum

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. The outer part of the exhibition

center

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had a new parking space but a smaller garden compared to the place in 1957. Most trees and plants were cut down in 2007, from 11 trees sharply decreased to only 2 plants left.

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, some

area

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originally

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belonged to the green area

was

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were

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developed

to

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a parking lot. A path which linked the road and the entrance of the

museum

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was deleted with the move of the entrance and the clear out of the garden.