The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.
The line graph compares the
number
of library books
read by male students and female students at Starmouth School between 2009 and 2012.
To summarize, both the numbers of books
men and women had risen in 2012 compared to 2009. The number
of the
readers the Correct article usage
apply
boys
had was higher than the girls
initially
, however
, the girls
had the
greater Correct article usage
a
number
of books
read than the boys
in 2012.
Number
of Change the article
A number
The number
books
the boys
read had a
increase in the beginning, from over 40 Change the article
an
books
increased
to 100 Verb problem
apply
books
in 2011. But a downturn came after the peak, the books
boy read in 2012 declined and sharply decreased to 80 Correct quantifier usage
number of books
books
in 2012.
Different from the boys
, the number
of books
girls
read had a continuous increase from 2009 to 2012. With approximately 20 books
in 2009, the number
of books
the girls
read was multiplied by 7, which had 140 books
in 2012. In addition
, the number
of books
the girls
read was one-third more than the boys
in 2012.Submitted by siuboong on
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