The government’s investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, governments have increased their investment in the art

industry

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. Regimes should direct their funds to the public

sector

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instead

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of wasting money by financing the

arts

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industry

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. I disagree with

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argument to a greater

disgree

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degree

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However

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to a lesser extent,

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agree with it. I believe that government investment in the

arts

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sector

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can help drive economic success and improve the

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wellbeing

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of

the

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society. The

arts

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industry

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attracts tourists from different parts of the world

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, bringing foreign currency and jobs for the citizens

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the tax base for the government.

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, the United States of America generates about 190 billion from the tourism

sector

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.

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, music shows and

theaters

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theatres

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can improve the mental and physical health

for

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certain

demographs

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demographics

of society, the elderly

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.

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, some studies show that when young children have access to

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and music , it improves their performance in academics.

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, to a lesser degree, authorities of a country should fund public services

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of spending huge amounts

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music,

arts

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and

theater

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theatre

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because it generally improves the

wellbeing

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well-being

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of the general public. Diverting investment to basic public services

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as education, healthcare and electricity will benefit the citizens. In conclusion,

the

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government funding

to

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the

arts

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industry

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is a waste of money so they should invest it in

the

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public services. I disagree to a larger extent with

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statement because the

arts

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industry

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is one of the crucial industries boosting the economy but to a slight extent

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agree that

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revenue should be redirected to the public

sector

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as it enhances the

overall

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wellbeing

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well-being

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of the general public.