Computers and A.I. technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

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In the digital age, computers and artificial intelligence play an important role in

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lives,

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online education.

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writer believes that it can help

students

be proactive in studying which

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the experience and convenience of distance learning is its benefit. It

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undeniable that computers and A.I. technology are more and more popular in

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field. In fact, it can help even both teachers and

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of learning which include

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of information,

knowledge

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curriculum .

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lessons in class ,

students

proatively

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probably

gain more

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the Internet ,

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leads to

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interest

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them in education ,

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create

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more realistic

experience

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which help them understand deeply and apply in

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. For

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instance

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difficult subject, it requires realistic experiments,

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half of

students

in the world who are not have money enough can search Google for

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information.

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, technology nowadays is

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preferred

by many schools

due to

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. In the past, it can be said that

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distance

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one of the barriers

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students

have

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difficulties

in studying and

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their

knowledge

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, at present, thanks to

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of technology , people from anywhere over the world can

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online ,

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also

connect with other friends who study about

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together .

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, through Zoom , Google

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,...

students

who live in Vietnam can participate in distance learning in

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Australia

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. In conclusion, computers and A.I. help

students

in studying which

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they

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proative

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proactive

in learning more

knowledge

. Its convenience

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people from

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the world can take part in correspondence

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and connect

friends

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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