The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates information about the level of
air
pollution in four different countries across
three
sectors in 2012.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that China ranked first in all
three
factors,
while
the United States is primarily impacted by transportation as a significant cause of
air
contamination, and Japan's main cause is factories or other industrial facilities, both of which ranked highest in two of the
three
parts. Specifically, China's
air
pollution levels are notably high, with all
three
sectors exceeding 50PPM,
in contrast
to the other
three
countries. Industrial facilities,
such
as factories and construction, account for a substantial majority of the contamination at 80PPM, followed by vehicles, including public transportation, at 70PPM, and electricity at 60PPM, which is more than double the amount of the second-ranked United States. In comparison, the United States is affected by electronic and industrial sources with an
air
quality impact of around 30PPM,
while
Japan shows similar impacts from transportation and significantly less from electronic consumption at 10PPM. In Australia, the data indicates it
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an environmentally conscious country, with its
air
pollution levels recorded at less than 20PPM in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, three, ppm with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pollutants
  • Industrialization
  • Regulations
  • Geographical factors
  • Emissions
  • Air quality
  • Carbon dioxide (CO2)
  • Particulate matter (PM)
  • Nitrogen oxides (NOx)
  • Fossil fuels
  • Renewable energy
  • Sustainable practices
  • Comparative analysis
  • Environmental impact
  • Public health
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