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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates information about the comparisons of six different nations which created trash from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
, it is evident from the chart that
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the U.S
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U.S.
 ranked first with
significant
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 figure which almost tripled other
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 quantity, followed by Japan and Korea for over twenty years.
However
,
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 is a significant change only in Korea
that
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it
consequently
 decreased
at the end
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while
 we can see
rest
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 of
nations
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the nations
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 gradually increased. Looking at the details of the chart,
US’s
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 tremendous amount of waste recorded more than
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millions
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 over twenty years, starting from 131
million
tonnes
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 rise
by
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 20million from 1980 to 1990, by 40
million
 for
next
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 10 years. When it comes to the number of Japan and Korea,
they
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recorded similar
amount
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 of trash around 20 to 50
million
tonnes
 but Korea’s effort to reduce waste worked and resulted in
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a halved
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 figure of 19
million
tonnes
 in 2000. Unlike other wasteful 3 countries, Ireland, Poland and Portugal’s trend seemed almost stable specifically under 5
million
tonnes
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 rise representing eco-friendly countries.
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