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The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA.

The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA.
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The table compares the proportions of different age groups, poverty rates, and individual
income
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 levels among citizens in
California
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,
Utah
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, and
Florida
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.
It is clear that
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Utah
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 had the largest percentage of people under 18,
while
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Florida
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 had a higher proportion of elderly people.
Moreover
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,
California
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 had the highest average
income
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, but
also
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 the highest poverty rate. Looking at the information in more detail regarding average
income
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,
California
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 had an average
income
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 of $23,000, which exceeded
Florida
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's by $1,000. Meanwhile,
Utah
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 had the lowest average
income
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 at $17,000 and 9% of its residents were considered poor.
In contrast
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,
California
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 and
Florida
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 had higher poverty rates, with the former at 16% and the latter at 12%. In terms of age distribution, the youngest age group (under 18) constituted 28% of the population in
Utah
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,
while
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California
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 and
Florida
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 had similar proportions at 17% and 16%, respectively.
In contrast
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, those over 60 accounted for 23% of the population in
Florida
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,
while
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 the figures were 13% in
California
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 and 8% in
Utah
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, california, utah, florida with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disparities
  • correlate
  • socio-economic factors
  • demographic
  • economic prosperity
  • variance
  • indicators
  • social welfare programs
  • economic development
  • policy-making
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