The chart below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy
The given charts illustrate the proportion of different
factors
that make people happy in two age groups. Overall
, for both groups, achievement at work was the largest segment while
other factors
constituted the least.
When it comes to people aged less than 30, achievement at work was the most considerable when it comes to happiness, comprising 31%. Moreover
, the second largest segment was doing hobbies, with 22%. Following
this
was having a good appearance and it stood at 18%. Lastly
, the share for travelling and other factors
showed a similar proportion, with 15% and 14% respectively.
With respect to people over 30, the overall
trend was similar and only the percentage showed a marginal difference. 31% of the youth answered that achievement at work makes them most happy. Furthermore
, 25% felt the most happy while
doing hobbies. Likewise
, one-fifth of young individuals said that financial security makes them happy. Only 14% of the total replied that being with family is an important factor, and a tenth chose other factors
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