The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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what

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the

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of the salmon looks like.

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, the

cycle

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comprises a number of steps, beginning with eggs being born in freshwater, followed by a development to alevin and

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ending up turning a spawning adult,

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the

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repeats. At the beginning of the process, eggs are born by spawning adults in the

fresh water

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freshwater

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, after which hatching for three months, eggs will turn into Alevin.

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those Alevin feed off yolk-sac for several weeks

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grow to Fry, at which point they gradually evolve and learn how to swim during 5 to 10 weeks. the process continues with Fry growing Parr, now Parr salmons have been several months old and

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developed finger markings, we can see at

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point their size has increased significantly. After 1 to 3 years, Parr has turned into Smolt, those fishes mostly reach their peak sizes, so they will group and head to sea.

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, those adults living 1-8 years at sea will spawn and die within 2 weeks,

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the

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will repeat.