The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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how

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the

cycle

of the salmon looks like.

Overall

, the

cycle

comprises a number of steps, beginning with eggs being born in freshwater, followed by a development to alevin and

finally

ending up turning a spawning adult,

then

the

cycle

repeats. At the beginning of the process, eggs are born by spawning adults in the

fresh water

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freshwater

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, after which hatching for three months, eggs will turn into Alevin.

Next,

those Alevin feed off yolk-sac for several weeks

then

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and then

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grow to Fry, at which point they gradually evolve and learn how to swim during 5 to 10 weeks. the process continues with Fry growing Parr, now Parr salmons have been several months old and

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developed finger markings, we can see at

this

point their size has increased significantly. After 1 to 3 years, Parr has turned into Smolt, those fishes mostly reach their peak sizes, so they will group and head to sea.

Subsequently

, those adults living 1-8 years at sea will spawn and die within 2 weeks,

then

the

cycle

will repeat.