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You have begun a new course at university and the professor gave you the first assignment of the course.You are not sure how to write the assignment. Write an email to your professor.In your letter: State your purpose Explain the problem Ask for an appoinment to discuss it

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Dear Ms.Gonda, I am writing to seek your assistance regarding the homework that you recently asked me to submit for next week.
According to
 your
instructions
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 I need to do
this
 with a partner,
however
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however,
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 I just joined the class and I am not so familiar with any of my classmates and most of them have chosen
there
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their
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 partners for the said task. Apart from that, I have no
time
 to bond with them since I have a
part
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part-time
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time
 job after classes. I would like to speak with you in your free
time
 to discuss
further
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 and to ask for your help in finding a partner for the assignment.
Otherwise
, maybe I can do the task on my own if no one is available to be my partner. I know your schedule is packed but please let me know the most convenient
time
 to meet you.Thank you in advance
maa'm
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ma'am
 and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours, Jane
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Task Achievement
To enhance your task response, ensure you fully develop your explanation of why you're unable to partner with a classmate. Mentioning any attempts to connect might strengthen your argument.
Coherence & Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas more fluidly. This will improve the flow of your letter.
Tone
You did a good job in maintaining a polite and respectful tone throughout the letter, suitable for communication with a professor.
Task Achievement
Your email clearly states the purpose right from the beginning, which meets the task requirements effectively.
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