The line graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city, by gender
The line graph below gives information about the figure for mobile phone
users
in a certain city, by men and women.
Overall
, it is noticeable that there were upward trends in the number of cell phone subscribers in both genders over the given time frame.
The number of male cell phone subscribers increased rapidly from 500 users
in 1995 to 2750 users
in 2015 and female subscribers rose significantly from 600 users
in 1995 to 2250 users
in 2015.Submitted by quianh2110 on
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