Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends were you stayed at their house. They have just send you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends, in your letter: Thank them for the holday and the photos Explain why didn't write earlier Invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear Jane, I'm so happy to hear from you again. I missed you so

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much and I can't wait to be back! I would

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thank you big time and Jake

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for

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accomodating

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accommodating

me in your

cozy

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cosy

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apartment and for letting me experience the best activities in your country.

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to that, the photos that you've sent me are all amazing! That will definitely serve as

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and a treasure for keeps! I wanted to apologize for not writing the

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as I got busy at work right after my vacation.

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, I cannot find time to write an appreciation letter but was planning to make it

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weekend,

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, since you have more time than me, I received a letter from you first. Just kidding! I'm excited to announce

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both that I'll be moving

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a bigger apartment next month and I would love to invite you to stay with me

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the coming holidays if both of you are free. I can't wait to see you again! Take care, Andy

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Structure

Continue to use a clear structure in your writing to enhance readability. Organize your thoughts coherently, with each paragraph focusing on a single main idea.

Content

To improve your task achievement score, try to fully address all parts of the prompt in a balanced manner, ensuring that no part is overlooked.

Tone

Your letter has a personal and warmly appreciative tone, which is very suitable for the context of writing to friends. This enhances the engagement of your letter.

Organization

The clear organization of your ideas into paragraphs, each serving a distinct purpose (thanking for the holiday and photos, explaining the delay in writing, and extending an invitation), contributes positively to the coherence and cohesion of your letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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