The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
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The line chart illustrates the total of
inquiries
sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city via three means of communication, between January and
June
2011.
It is clear that
visitors to the city made more
inquiries
in person and via telephone,
while
written letters and
emails
became the least common choices.
Additionally
, the statistics in person experienced the most dramatic change among the different options. In January, the Tourist Information Office received 900
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inquiries
,
while
just under 800 letters and
emails
were received. Not many tourists chose to ask for information directly, with just over 400 queries. Over the next three months, the telephone remained the most popular method of inquiry with approximately 1000 queries. Meanwhile, the figure of
inquiries
made in person saw considerable growth to 800, surpassing the figures for
emails
and postal
inquiries
. From March to
June
, live questions were the most common method of inquiry. By
June
, the statistic soared by more than 1,000 to peak at 1,900. During
this
period, there was
also
a significant rise in the figure for phone
inquiries
, from 1000 to 1600.
By contrast
, fewer people sent
emails
or letters, with slightly less than 400 in May and
June
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words inquiries, june, emails with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • in person
  • by letter/email
  • by telephone
  • general trend
  • six-month period
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • decline
  • peak
  • fluctuations
  • monthly data
  • comparison
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