The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#first #energy #australian #household #second #greenhouse #gas #emissions #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The given charts provide information about
Use synonyms
energy
uses of an Correct article usage
the energy
Avarage
Australian household and greenhouse Correct your spelling
average
gas
emissions which result from Use synonyms
energy
uses.
Use synonyms
Overall
, from the given charts, Linking Words
most
Correct article usage
the most
Use synonyms
energy used
appliance in Australian Add a hyphen
energy-used
household
was heating Fix the agreement mistake
households
with
42%, but, from the second Change preposition
at
chart
, Use synonyms
water
heating Use synonyms
resulted
most Add the preposition
resulted in
resulted from
gas
emissions with 32% which used 30% of Use synonyms
energy
use.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, from the first Linking Words
chart
, heating was the most Use synonyms
energy
used unit with 42%, after heating, Use synonyms
water
heating which was 30% and other appliances with 15% comes in. Use synonyms
While
heating, Linking Words
water
heating and other appliances Use synonyms
used
more than 10% of Australian household Wrong verb form
use
energy
, refrigeration 7%, lightning 4% and cooling 2% these units are all below 10% uses of Use synonyms
energy
.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, from the second Linking Words
chart
, Use synonyms
water
heating Use synonyms
resulted
most of the Add the preposition
resulted in
resulted from
green house
Correct your spelling
greenhouse
gas
emissions which Use synonyms
was
32%, Change the verb form
were
substantly
other appliances and refrigeration ranked in with 28% and 14%. Just like the rankings of the first Correct your spelling
substantially
chart
, but only heating changes into refrigeration. After 3 most Use synonyms
gas
Use synonyms
emmited
units, heating with 15%, lightning with 8% and cooling with 3%.Correct your spelling
emitted
Submitted by buyabuya201 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas, chart, water with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 6 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼