The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Electricity Generation by Source in New Zealand

The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and

Germany in 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Electricity Generation by Source in New Zealand
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The above pie chart illustrates the amount of electricity generated in two countries over the course of two years. They were calculated in
units
. New
Zealand
produced 127
units
as a whole in
1980's
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the 1980's
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and 200 in 2010. The
heighest
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highest
number of
units
is produced
at
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in
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New
Zealand
in1980
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in 1980
.
Overall
, the
production
of Coal has been the
heighest
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highest
in both the places and in both the years. Which ranges
upto
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up to
56 and 28 in 1980 and 150 and 28 in 2010.
Secondly
, the ratio of Petroleum is slightly lower than the previous one.
On the other hand
, the
production
of Nuclear had added up in Germany, which plays a major role in
production
in both the years ranges between 155 and 20.
Besides
, Natural Gas ranged between 30-2 in New
Zealand
and in
Germany
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Germany,
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it ranged between 28-2. Considerably the
production
of Hydro is
comparitively
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comparatively
lesser than all the others. Surprisingly the
production
of
units
in New
Zealand
is quite higher than the
production
made
at
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in
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Germany.
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