The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two charts presented, the above one shows the percentage of households with electrical appliances and the other one illustrates the number of
hours
of housework per week
, per household
in the year
1920 to 2019. We can see that the sum of electrical appliances Fix the agreement mistake
years
household
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in household
ownerships
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ownership
had been
increased over the Wrong verb form
has
years
. The second chart informs us that the hours
of housework per week
had been
gradually Verb problem
apply
descended
by nearly ten decades.
There are three tools mentioned, namely washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner. We can see that the usage of vacuum Verb problem
decreased
cleaner
was constantly climbing from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000 and 2019. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
Whereas
the total of households installed
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that installed
refrigerator
was nearly zero in the first data and exponentially increased until every Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
household
had refrigerator
in 1980, it became constant after. Add an article
a refrigerator
the refrigerator
On the other hand
, washing machine
had a slight fluctuation in 1980. It slowly ascended and reached over 70% in the Fix the agreement mistake
machines
last
data.
In sharp contrast to this
, the data shows that 50 hours
were spent per week
to do the chores manually in 1920. It gradually dropped as more machine
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machines
used
over the Add a missing verb
were used
years
. The sum was unchanged between the years
1980 and 2000. Then
it decreased again to a little above 10% hours
per week
in every household
in the later 19 years
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