The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two charts presented, the above one shows the percentage of households with electrical appliances and the other one illustrates the number of
hours
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of housework per
week
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, per
household
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in the
year
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years
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1920 to 2019. We can see that the sum of electrical appliances
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household
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in household
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ownerships
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ownership
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had been
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has
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increased over the
years
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. The second chart informs us that the
hours
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of housework per
week
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had
been
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gradually
descended
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decreased
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by nearly ten decades. There are three tools mentioned, namely washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner. We can see that the usage of vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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was constantly climbing from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000 and 2019.
Whereas
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the total of households
installed
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that installed
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refrigerator
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refrigerators
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was nearly zero in the first data and exponentially increased until every
household
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had
refrigerator
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a refrigerator
the refrigerator
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in 1980, it became constant after.
On the other hand
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, washing
machine
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machines
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had a slight fluctuation in 1980. It slowly ascended and reached over 70% in the
last
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data. In sharp contrast to
this
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, the data shows that 50
hours
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were spent per
week
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to do the chores manually in 1920. It gradually dropped as more
machine
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machines
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used
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were used
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over the
years
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. The sum was unchanged between the
years
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1980 and 2000.
Then
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it decreased again to a little above 10%
hours
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per
week
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in every
household
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in the later 19
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, household, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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