Q. you recently stayed with a childhood friend for a few days. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for letting you stay with them. refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you
Dear
Jimmy
,
I hope you're doing well. I'm
still in my previouse
job and Correct your spelling
previous
little
bit busy Add an article
a little
on
these Change preposition
apply
days
. I'm
writing this
letter in my
free time that I got for my studies for Change the word
the
PHD
. Correct your spelling
PhD
Jimmy
I hope you're doing well on you're newely
opened business. Correct your spelling
newly
I'
Change the verb form
I still remember
m
still remember how we trying
to fix that table for your office, how wonderful was that.
Wrong verb form
tried
Jimmy
, the days
that I spend with you together is
the best Correct subject-verb agreement
are
days
in
my life. I couldn't imagine how Change preposition
of
does
I Unnecessary verb
apply
servived
on that jump from the waterfall, that Correct your spelling
survived
so
Add a missing verb
was so
exited
. What Correct your spelling
excited
a
wonderful Correct article usage
apply
days
! that
we together spent all the timeCorrect word choice
apply
.
Thank you for everything that you Rephrase
together.
give
me on Wrong verb form
gave
that
Correct determiner usage
those
days
.
Jimmy
, I'm
writing this
letter because of a wonderful thing to tell you. That's Rephrase
why I'm
I'
Unnecessary verb
I
m
hope to participate to
an adventure trip Change preposition
in
on
Change preposition
apply
this
upcoming month. I'
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I'd
m
love to invite you to participate to
Change preposition
in
this
event with me, because with you I'm
able to do anything. I know you are so exited
to hear Correct your spelling
excited
this
news. The organizing commity
does not review the games and adventures that Correct your spelling
committee
has
to be done. I will let you know Change the verb form
have
soon
as I Rephrase
as soon
got
them.
Your lovely friend,
HushWrong verb form
get
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Expression and Consistency
Consider revising for clearer expression and maintaining consistency in verb tenses throughout your letter.
Logical Structure
Try to organize your ideas more clearly with distinct paragraphs for each point.
Coherence Enhancement
Use a closing sentence in your paragraphs to sum up your ideas or express anticipation for the upcoming trip, enhancing the letter's coherence.
Expression
Your warm tone and the genuine expression of gratitude and excitement contribute positively to the letter.
Format
You successfully followed the letter format, which includes a greeting, body paragraphs, and a closing signature.
Content
The mention of a shared memory and the invitation to join an adventure trip are good strategies to personalize the letter and make it engaging.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,