The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country betweeen 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph indicates the
number
of Use synonyms
stores
that closed and opened new Use synonyms
stores
in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Looking at the Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the opening Linking Words
Use synonyms
stores
dramatically decreased compared with in the years 2011 and 2018. Change preposition
of stores
However
, despite of sharp decrease for the year Linking Words
in
2015, the closures Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
stores
a little bit declined.
A cursory glance at the data reveals thatChange preposition
of stores
the
8,500 Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
stores
opened in 2011 Use synonyms
while
, it Linking Words
was
considerably dropped in 2011 to about 4,000. Between 2012 and 2014, the Unnecessary verb
apply
number
of new shops gradually rose by 4,000 to approximately 6,100. Use synonyms
After
Linking Words
this
period, the Linking Words
number
of shops decreased significantly by over 5,000. Use synonyms
Also
, between 2015 and 2018 show little changes.
Another eye-catching trend is that the Linking Words
number
of closures Use synonyms
stores
started at over 6,000 in 2011, slightly fell Use synonyms
at
6,000 in 2012, rose by 1,000 in 2013, dropped to about 6,500 in the year 2014, and Change preposition
to
further
declined to 5,00 for the year 2015. Linking Words
However
, it soared sharply in 2016 at nearly 5,000 and maintained a similar level from 2016 and 2018.Linking Words
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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