The pie charts below give information about the population of South Korea in 2000 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two pie charts illustrate the analysis of the population in South Korea by
ages
in the given period: 2000 and 2050.
Fix the agreement mistake
age
Overall
, it is clearly seen that people with
Change preposition
between
ages
Correct article usage
the ages
between
40 and 59 took up the largest proportion of the charts both in 2000 and in 2050.
In detail, the percentage of children who is the age of under 19 was 15% in 2000, but Change preposition
of
in contrast
, that of children is anticipated to decrease from 15% to 7% in 2050. The younger generation, who are between 20 and 39 years
old, was 33%, which is then
expected to a
slight decrease in 2050 of 4%. There was a projection that both Add a missing verb
be a
generation
Change to a plural noun
generations
of
from 40 to 59 Change preposition
apply
years
old and over 60 years
old will increase over a 50-year period.
Turning to the figure for the figure for 2050, people with
above 40 Change preposition
apply
years
old is
expected to take up Correct subject-verb agreement
are
among
the whole generation in 2050 (64%). Change preposition
apply
In addition
, the percentage of the young under 19 years
old is expected to consist of just 7%, which is the least
proportion in 2050.Correct word choice
lowest
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