The pie charts below give information about the population of South Korea in 2000 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given two pie charts illustrate the analysis of the population in South Korea by

ages

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age

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in the given period: 2000 and 2050.

Overall

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, it is clearly seen that people

with

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between

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ages

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the ages

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between

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40 and 59 took up the largest proportion of the charts both in 2000 and in 2050. In detail, the percentage of children who is the age of under 19 was 15% in 2000, but

in contrast

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, that of children is anticipated to decrease from 15% to 7% in 2050. The younger generation, who are between 20 and 39

years

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old, was 33%, which is

then

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expected to

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be a

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slight decrease in 2050 of 4%. There was a projection that both

generation

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generations

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apply

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from 40 to 59

years

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old and over 60

years

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old will increase over a 50-year period. Turning to the figure for the figure for 2050, people

with

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apply

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above 40

years

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old

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are

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expected to take up

among

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apply

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the whole generation in 2050 (64%).

In addition

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, the percentage of the young under 19

years

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old is expected to consist of just 7%, which is the

least

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lowest

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proportion in 2050.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

185 words

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