The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The plan presents three potential places for a recreation facility. The first possible location A is
besides
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beside
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a large factory in the
north west
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northwest
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of a nearby river
whereas
the second one, site C is in the north of three
sky scrappers
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skyscrapers
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next to a road.
Moreover
, site C is located in the west of the river. Location C is next to a fields
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • prospective
  • recreational facilities
  • infrastructure
  • proximity
  • pedestrian access
  • public transport links
  • green spaces
  • commercial area
  • residential zone
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental impact
  • urban planning
  • feasibility
  • demographics
  • footfall
  • zoning regulations
  • land use
  • catchment area
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