You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter: -Complain about the situation -Say why this is a problem -And propose ways to reduce the noise.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'
m
writing to complain your
new campus restaurant Change preposition
about your
make
Wrong verb form
making
the
high levels of Correct article usage
apply
noise
. I'm
studying in
a University. Change preposition
at
Likewise
, I'm
living there is
. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, there has
some problems. Verb problem
are
That is
, loudly voises
with squeal problems.
Correct your spelling
voices
Firstly
, the incessant noise
disrupts my study schedule, sleep pattern, and overall
well-being, emphasizing the impact on my academic performance. Consequently
, it affects my ability to study, I can't do well in my classes, especially it
makes my parents face down, and it causes my future plans to Correct word choice
because it
fails
. If you Change the verb form
fail
are stopping
Wrong verb form
stop
this
action, I'm
pursued from University
dormitory. Correct article usage
the University
This
is very bad for me.
Secondly
, you must implementing
soundproofing measures in the restaurant, Change the verb form
implement
be implementing
such
as installing noise- canceling
barriers or double-glazed windows, to mitigate the Correct your spelling
noise-canceling
noise
. Henceforth, you must establishing
strict operational hours for the restaurant, like you should Change the verb form
establish
be establishing
implementing
an earlier closure time to ensure the Wrong verb form
implement
noise
does not affect the residents late at night. I hope you will make the
Remove the article
apply
this
works
.
Yours sincerely,
Khusan EsomurodovFix the agreement mistake
work
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Clarity
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Structure
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Grammar
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Detail
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Task Completion
Your letter addresses all required points: the complaint, the reason it's a problem, and proposing solutions.
Tone
You've maintained a relatively formal tone suitable for writing to a university official, which is good practice.
