The map below shows a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The provided maps show a public
park
in 1920 and how it’s been redesigned today.
Overall
, while
the location of few
of the places Correct article usage
a few
have
remained the same, newer places have Change the verb form
has
also
been built and added to the scheme.
It is noticeable from the design in 1920 that the fountain in the central area has been replaced by the rose garden surrounded by seats. The water feature has taken the place of the glasshouse in the right corner below; leaving no place for the earlier seats. Although
there was a stage for musicians at the left of the park
about a century ago, it has been replaced by an amphitheatre for concerts which people can enjoy.
In addition
to the upper and lower entrances, an entrance for the underground car park
is placed near the water feature. The top left rose garden hasn’t changed, whereas
the other one has been removed and replaced by a cafe. Furthermore
, it appears that having a children’s play area was more appealing to those who changed the park
as opposed to a water-plant pond.Submitted by viana.elahi on
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