The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates three leisure destinations in a rural
area
. I will clarify some features of this
zone.Overall
, it can be seen that these places are divided into different regions with their own function
The A area
may be an industry place where air managers can come to work because there is a lot of smoke coming out of the chimney- perhaps an air handling system. It is located near a river so the industrial waste can float into the river
The B area
is a place where there are 3 buildings. It is a functional area
or high supermarket mall, people can come there for recreational activities
Not far from the B zone isthe
C Correct your spelling
is the
area
. It is surrounded by large lush trees . I think it is a good place to camp and relax because there are shadows of trees that can shade usSubmitted by nhuquynhbn2004 on
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