The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
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The given table compares the proportion of kids ever born to women aged 40-44
years
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in Australia between 1981 and 2006. Looking for an
overall
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perspective, it can be clearly seen from the table that the number of two
children
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who ever
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born
from
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to
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mothers between 40-44
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had the highest percentage.
Likewise
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, mothers with no child had the lowest one in 1981.
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with, the number of
children
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that
born
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were born
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int
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in
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these four
years
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considerably declined
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began
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with
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27.6% and ended up with 11%.
Besides
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, the percentage of three kids experienced a minor decline in
this
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period which had
similar
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a similar
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proportion in 1981 and 1986.
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, looking for more details figures for two
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were dominant, reaching approximately 38% in 2006. For more details, it is obvious that the proportion of one child and none that
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almost doubled throughout these
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.
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, it can be seen that these trends showed
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women were not interested
to have
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in having
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more than three
children
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • demographic shift
  • age cohort
  • workforce implications
  • government policy
  • birth rate fluctuations
  • education level
  • career advancement
  • reproductive health
  • family planning
  • socio-economic factors
  • population pyramid
  • life expectancy
  • childbearing age
  • maternity leave
  • contraceptive methods
  • population growth rate
  • average family size
  • maternal health
  • census data
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