The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The given table compares the proportion of kids ever born to women aged 40-44
years
in Australia between 1981 and 2006. Looking for an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it can be clearly seen from the table that the number of two Linking Words
children
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who ever
born Correct your spelling
whoever
from
mothers between 40-44 Change preposition
to
years
had the highest percentage. Use synonyms
Likewise
, mothers with no child had the lowest one in 1981.
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To begin
with, the number of Linking Words
children
that Use synonyms
born
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were born
int
these four Correct your spelling
in
years
considerably declined Use synonyms
which
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apply
began
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beginning
with
27.6% and ended up with 11%. Change preposition
at
Besides
, the percentage of three kids experienced a minor decline in Linking Words
this
period which had Linking Words
similar
proportion in 1981 and 1986.
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a similar
On the other hand
, looking for more details figures for two Linking Words
children
were dominant, reaching approximately 38% in 2006. For more details, it is obvious that the proportion of one child and none that Use synonyms
born
almost doubled throughout these Add a missing verb
were born
years
. Use synonyms
Finally
, it can be seen that these trends showed Linking Words
the
women were not interested Correct your spelling
that
to have
more than three Change preposition
in having
children
.Use synonyms
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