The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The given table compares the proportion of kids ever born to women aged 40-44
years
in Australia between 1981 and 2006. Looking for an overall
perspective, it can be clearly seen from the table that the number of two children
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whoever
from
mothers between 40-44 Change preposition
to
years
had the highest percentage. Likewise
, mothers with no child had the lowest one in 1981.
To begin
with, the number of children
that born
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were born
int
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in
years
considerably declined which
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beginning
with
27.6% and ended up with 11%. Change preposition
at
Besides
, the percentage of three kids experienced a minor decline in this
period which had similar
proportion in 1981 and 1986.
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a similar
On the other hand
, looking for more details figures for two children
were dominant, reaching approximately 38% in 2006. For more details, it is obvious that the proportion of one child and none that born
almost doubled throughout these Add a missing verb
were born
years
. Finally
, it can be seen that these trends showed the
women were not interested Correct your spelling
that
to have
more than three Change preposition
in having
children
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